Page 2 is interesting but lacks any reference to specific films with high production values, particularly thrillers. Thus Page 2 is hugely generalised and lacks examples to support your points. For example you mention aspects of mainstream films which include transport etc. I suggest you seriously reconsider redrafting this page using the basic rule of point EVIDENCE explain!
If you are going to include Warp Films you need to research their website to see what specifically on that website targets the 16-25 year old demographic so that you link your comments closely to evidence of research.
At the moment upper Level 2- Level 3. More examples are required to suggest suitable internet sites to platform or market your film, and suitable cinemas for exhibition. For example you could take snapshots of the films "coming soon" in the foyer of Vue, and of Cinema City to emaphsise the difference between multiplex listings and independent cinema listings.
Page 2 is interesting but lacks any reference to specific films with high production values, particularly thrillers. Thus Page 2 is hugely generalised and lacks examples to support your points. For example you mention aspects of mainstream films which include transport etc. I suggest you seriously reconsider redrafting this page using the basic rule of point EVIDENCE explain!
ReplyDeleteIf you are going to include Warp Films you need to research their website to see what specifically on that website targets the 16-25 year old demographic so that you link your comments closely to evidence of research.
At the moment upper Level 2- Level 3. More examples are required to suggest suitable internet sites to platform or market your film, and suitable cinemas for exhibition. For example you could take snapshots of the films "coming soon" in the foyer of Vue, and of Cinema City to emaphsise the difference between multiplex listings and independent cinema listings.
Ok, I've revised the post and done the nesscessary changes
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